You really could have had some sort of narrator for your version of the Creapy Pasta Squidward's Suicide. That is pretty much waist made this toon a flop. It didn't fit the theme of a Creapy pasta. I like that you tried to use Five Nights at Freddie's Screems to make scary roars and stuff. but not enough scary and unexpected part of the film to jump scare you failed deeply on that tho.
The best part of this Short is the Clumsy Clarneting of Squidward. The animation and special Effects of the scene were Awesome.
Please Try to Follow the source material and story of a Famous Creapy Pasta. Red Mist's Did not Look, feel, or sound like Squdward's Suicide.
Keep up the good work.
May the power of Animation be with you.
Thank you for your somewhat entertaining Cartoon.